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Request: firejade15 2

Published: Sep 3, 2013

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This is by another request of firejade15. He said he wanted his Pony Form Fire being swallowed by Twilight Sparkle whilst Cameron (My Pony Form) and Rainbow Dash are hugging each other, well here it is.

Hope you like it, firejade15!

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Hope you'll like it!

MLP - FIM (C) Hasbro
OCs (C) Cameron (Me) and Fire
Background (C)

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Mature

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OOrangeCups

Jul 6, 2016

Today i'm not gonna be a misjudging brat. Here is some
criticism
1) DONT USE PONY CREATOR It basically ruins the whole point of it being a "drawing" Also you give credit to the person who made the backround but not the horses themselves? No one will believe that you drew that
2)Can you do more then just vore? Or at least put mature content or something. A few people will most likely attack you for this. (since basically everyone nowadays is trump in a nutshell)
3)Give the pictures/drawing more detail. If you somehow ignore me I don't care but please add more depth and detail to your pictures. At least try to add your own little things to the ponies (Your own unique style added to some parts of the body) It really shows you put TIME and EFFORT in your art.

Please don't take this as a hate comment or a nice loving comment. Its just

Criticism. ~Oorangecups

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